Showing posts with label Defamiliarization. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Defamiliarization. Show all posts

Sunday, November 3, 2019

prior atom by Jukka-Peka Kervinen (Reviewed by Clara B. Jones in Entropy, 7/2019)


prior atom
Jukka-Pekka Kervinen
2019
ma press, Finland (lulu.com)
Unpaginated (136 pp)
$5.00

Reviewed by Clara B. Jones in Entropy, July 2019

“Where technology leads, Art follows.” Kenneth Goldsmith

The broad categories of digital poetry and electronic writing are sub-genres of experimental literature which the Russian Formalist, Viktor Shklovsky, defined as “extreme deviation from that which is familiar.” In his view, experimental writing is “strange”—“defamiliarizing” what we think of as the conventional, particularly, the lyrical, emotional, representational, or meaningful. Writing in the early 20th century, Shklovsky could not have had the electronic methods of Jukka-Pekka Kervinen in mind, but both artists' visions embody the spirit of disruption of and resistance to the status quo.

prior atom, in its author's words, is a “procedural/visual text” of computer-generated compositions arranged on the page in a form approximating traditional poems. Each mélange of words, some overlapping, is presented with frequent white spaces, a presentation highlighting every element as a unit capable of standing on it's own from which meaning may or may not be derived. Though it is not easy or necessary to categorize the compositions, they may be understood in the context of “collage” writing, a Modernist conception with origins in Cubist visual art (e.g., Picasso), as well as, in Dadaism and Surrealism. The Dadaist poet and performance artist, Tristan Tzara, for example, advocated, in the mid-20th century, a “cut-up” method of composition, and, in the late 1990s, the poetry critic, Marjorie Perloff, stated, “Each element in the collage has a kind of double function: it refers to an external reality even as it's compositional thrust is to undercut the very referentiality it seems to assert.” Collage poetry, then, is characterized by a juxtaposition of opposing elements—the a word's definition and a composition's formal radicalism. An example of one of Kervinen's compositions, included in prior atom, follows:

[insert jpeg composition here]


Jukka-Pekka Kervinen is a Finnish composer, producer, writer, visual artist, and publisher [ma press] focused mainly on algorithmic processes, computer-assisted composition, and various other methods based on cybernetics, chaotic dynamics, and stochastic systems, among others. I asked him, via Facebook, to describe his creative methods, curious, especially, about whether the formatting of his compositions was intentional or randomly-generated. In his own words, the author informed me that the layout was “computer-generated” but that he wrote the programs by himself, using the computer as an “extended pen, meaning that I have very exact image of what I want to do. Instead of making them 'traditional' way by writing/typing/etc, I write a program or programs to make and generate certain decisions and other structures/forms.For 'prior atom' I wrote only one, longer program which generates whole book, vocabulary is mine, i.e., I have maintained and edited this same word selection ca. 15 years, it is very specific for me, and still constantly edited.... All layouts of the pages and choice of words and their placements are generated by my program, under constraints I make beforehand running it, and the program makes finished PDF....”

Kervinen's methods have historical roots in the textual and visual forms of the OuLiPo movement's systematic, self-restricting means of making texts, as well as, similarities to “asemic” writing's textual and visual forms [“vispo”] having no necessary or specific semantic content. Certainly, the author's procedures constitute “word play,” yielding a type of “word salad” or coded mixture. The compositions in prior atom are intended to be seen in a manner similar to the visualization of Gertrude Stein's writing discussed by the Stein scholar, Ulla Dydo.

Though Kervinen's compositions resist interpretation and lack formal or logical structure, a “reader” may impose meaning or significance where these are not necessarily intended. A maxim of Postmodernism is that interpretation is in the mind of the “reader”—or, visualizer, in this case, and the human brain is designed to seek order within actual or apparent disorder. Thus, some persons accessing these constructs may discover that certain “devices” [Shklovsky] unify the book. For example, references to animals occur throughout—rodent, ferret, lynx, walleye, hen, emu, to name a few, and it might occur to a poetically-inclined visualizer that a list poem could be created from these, or other, repetitions. Similarly, each composition's makeup lends itself to combination and re-combination of words [e.g., “doable taxonomy,” “rainy forest”] that might be employed as prompts or could be incorporated into verse. While playing with a few of the compositions as if they were databases, I created an original haiku without much effort [“Homicide casework, / forbid unjustly person, / dread stalwart, indeed.”]. Many other potential significations and associations are latent in the text.

Perhaps, it can be suggested, that the best way to approach prior atom is to allow the collection's layout, arrangement, literary style, and format to speak for themselves. As such, each composition has what the Formalist poetry critic, Helen Vendler, calls, “interpretive power” with the potential to produce verbal, visual, and “psychological transformations.” The consumer of literature is fortunate that.Jukka-Pekka Kervinen continues to create experimental writing producing unique formulations and theories of reality and composition, emanating, as a case in point, from this collection that can be “taken at face value,” as well as, richly interpreted. prior atom is necessary reading for anyone interested in cutting-edge innovative writing at its best.






Sunday, March 3, 2019

BlogPost in progress: my developing Aesthetics/Poetics (Clara B. Jones-3/2019)

"Works of art that achieve 'masterpiece' status share several characteristics: they convey a special type of originality that captures the imagination; they stand the test of time; and, they change the way artists or readers-observers think about their genre or sub-genre." based on/after Goldstein JL (9/20/2018) What makes a piece of Art or Science a 'masterpiece'? Cell 175: 1-5.


Other criteria based upon Modernist and Russian Formalists--especially as they may pertain to poetry [in no particular order at this point]:

Overview: THEME, FORM, PLOT, MOTIF, NARRATORS, CHARACTERIZATION, IMAGERY, FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE

--interpretive power
--changes the way we look at things
--stands the test of time
--stimulates the imagination
-- form [including, in most cases, strong beginning and ending]/style
----arrangement/visual-textual/title[s]
--technique/devices [especially, Shklovsky's "strangeness,"&  "de-famiarization;" also, see Wittengein's "language games"]; "transrational poetry/experiments" [Shklovsky & other Russian Cubo-Futurists]; zaum;[Khlebnikov, Kruchenykh--Russian Cubo-Futurists] 
--theory[ies] behind work
--music/rhythm [meter?]
--rhyme 
--color
--content/theme/subject [still mulling this one]
--integrity in the sense of part-whole and/or part-part coherence
--image
--intentionality [?]
--"anti-automatism" [?; see Surrealism]
--non-didactic
--non-literal ["literal" usually related to "didactic"]
--beauty [how to define?]
--"psychological transformations" [effects upon motivation, emotions/feelings, sensations, perceptions (e.g., Gestalt effects)], cognition, ideations; effects on unconscious [Surrealism] by way of "defense mechanisms;" effects on "self" [e.g., self-image, self-concept] 
--include "spiritual" effects? [what would this mean?]




Wednesday, January 16, 2019

Review of The Word Factory by Mark Young (Clara B. Jones)


The Word Factory: a miscellany
Mark Young
2018
gradient books (Finland)

Reviewed by Clara B. Jones taking a journey on the path of experimental book reviewing*...

“There exists no science of word creation” Velimir Khlebnikov

Author: Mark Young is an internationally recognized writer and publisher of the poetry journal, Otoliths, who has produced dozens of books and has been featured in jacket2 and by the Poetry Foundation. He lives in Australia.

What is The Word Factory about? From the author: “A strange mix, a miscellany as the subtitle says. Some pieces written during & about the George W. Bush presidency; the Allegrezza translations; prose works that investigate the landscape where the writing takes place; poems that don't fit elsewhere. All put together to try & hold up a night sky, to give it faint stars & distant constellations.”

Formal structure:
Arrangement: various textual forms in four parts—
  1. “Bush Tucker”: “Because he had experienced neither, President Bush confused the word/poetry and poverty./He said:/Many in our country do not know the pain of poetry, but we can listen/to those who do.” (p 16)
  2. “some translations by Umberto Allegrezza”: “Alexander/came and Tyre fell; &/later on the Greeks,/rats gnawing away/at what was left.” (p 33)
  3. “Odds and Sods”: “tomorrow/i begin my/studies to/become a/transplant surgeon/the day/after that/i take my/finals exam/it's a series/of multiple/choice/questions—/much easier/for the/tutors to/mark—” (p 53)
  4. “The Word Factory”: “At 1.27 p.m. a directive comes down from Management. The remainder of/the afternoon will be spent putting together a new word, two words/actually, both without n, to build up stocks for the projected rush on them./I finish off my shift using my dots to complete the exclamation marks that/our Marketing people believe will be a much in demand accessory to/accompany Global Catastrophe.” (p 67)

Features: form (various textual forms); content/theme/subject (various); meter/rhyme (various, including, improvisational, free verse); style (playful, eclectic, innovative; stabilizing & destabilizing at the same time); technique (“defamiliarization”; “Art as device for making strange”: Viktor Shklovsky)

Poetic sub-genres: conventional (p 17); vispo (p 45); erasure (p 47); prose (p 50); mixed (p 51); list (p 63); flash fiction (p 82)

Theories behind text: Modernism, PoMo

Conclusion: Read this book if you want to know the mystery of a shooting star or of a treasure hunt through enchanted forests of entities both autonomous and whole embedded in real and imagined worlds. This noteworthy book is a happening. Go along for the ride. It is a unique and worthy experience.

*Published in The Curly Mind, 12/2018